Dear Rev. Crystal Groves (Crystal Groves),
Congratulations! Your Liturgy 1 submission passes.
Three things of note:
1) In MLA, you don’t have a comma between the author’s name and the page number in in-line citations. You do that a couple of times.
2) You mention in Q5 that the well is rooted in Celtic stuff, and I’ll challenge you not to forget the important wells in Norse lore.
3) In #10 you mention that we’re “invoking;” technically speaking, we “evoke,” but “invoke” has become fashionable enough that I can’t dock you for it
Blessings,
Rev. Michael Dangler
